0708-24 University Writing Program, 2007-2008

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UNIVERSITY SENATE   
                       Bill Number:  0708-24
UNIVERSITY AT ALBANY
STATE UNIVERSITY OF NEW YORK
Introduced by:    UAC
Date:
                April 17, 2008
UNIVERSITY WRITING PROGRAM
IT IS HEREBY PROPOSED THAT:
1. The University Writing Program proposed by the Provost’s Task Force on 
Undergraduate Writing Instruction  be adopted with the following amendments:
a.
A University Writing Committee be established as a standing 
subcommittee of the General Education Committee of the Undergraduate 
Academic Council of the University Senate. Assessment remains within  
the structure established by the University Council on Assessment.
b. The current General Education policies regarding writing-intensive (WI) 
courses be revised to replace the Lower Level Writing Intensive 
requirements by the first-year University Writing Seminar described in 
Appendix B of the proposal, or its equivalent as deemed by the University 
Writing Committee.
2. This proposal be forwarded to the Interim President George M. Philip for 
approval.
Rationale of amendments:
a. Since the Writing Program is part of the General Education program, the University 
Writing Committee should be a subcommittee of the General Education Committee.
b. UAC highly regards the University Writing Program the Provost’s Task Force on 
Undergraduate Writing Instruction. It is a proposal worthwhile to be adopted as 
originally planned. However, many undergraduate programs are already taxed to a 
limit with the number of General Education requirements at University at Albany. 
Given the state and constraints of our programs, it was determined that to improve 
the current writing program, the university should adopt the University Writing 
Seminar but still keep the writing requirements at two courses. Should the General 
Education requirements be reduced at a later time, then the university could adopt 
the full-fledged University Writing Proposal attached below.
 
Program Rationale
The University at Albany's current program of undergraduate writing instruction does not 
provide adequate support for students' development as writers, readers, and thinkers 
during their undergraduate careers.  The Task Force on Undergraduate Writing 
Instruction, charged in August, 2006, by Provost Susan Herbst with reviewing the state of
writing instruction at UAlbany, identified three main areas of concern with the current 
writing-intensive (WI) program: (1) the current program is inconsistent with available 
research on writing development and effective writing instruction; (2) undergraduate 
students at UAlbany receive too little direct instruction in writing, too little sustained 
practice in writing in a variety of forms and contexts, and inconsistent support for their 
development as writers over time; and (3) UAlbany faculty feel underprepared and 
insufficiently supported to teach writing effectively. In addition, the task force 
emphasized the lack of oversight of the current WI program to ensure consistency across 
WI courses and to coordinate appropriate resources to support faculty who teach WI 
courses and to promote effective instruction in all WI courses.  As the task force noted in 
its report, "for the average UAlbany student, effective instruction in 
writing is a matter of chance, depending upon which instructors they 
encounter and which WI or writing courses they may decide (or are 
advised) to take. Few UAlbany faculty find this situation acceptable, 
and indeed many find it embarrassing and even unconscionable" (p. 4).
(See http://www.albany.edu/ir/UAlb_Writing_Task_Force_Final_Report_2007.pdf)  This 
proposal is intended to address these concerns and to strengthen undergraduate education 
at UAlbany by establishing a comprehensive and coherent University Writing Program.
Writing is a complex and multi-faceted cognitive, intellectual, and social activity 
essential to students' development as critically aware, literate persons. Much more than a 
set of basic communication skills and knowledge of the conventions of written language, 
writing can be understood in three ways.  First, writing is fundamentally a form of 
inquiry and knowledge-making and therefore an essential component of academic 
achievement and participation in society.  Second, writing is a means by which students 
gain access to the academic discourses that characterize intellectual inquiry in 
postsecondary institutions.  Third, writing is a cognitive and social process by which 
students come to know themselves and the world around them better; managing this 
process is one of the most important components of writing competence.  
Available research indicates that students' writing abilities develop unevenly over time 
and within specific contexts.  The main challenge facing students at the postsecondary 
level is to negotiate the complexities of written discourse across various disciplinary 
contexts and to learn appropriate rhetorical strategies to negotiate varied writing and 
reading tasks in those different contexts.  Meeting this challenge requires attention to 
every phase of the writing process, including developing, organizing, revising, and 
copyediting a written text and assuring that it conforms to the stylistic and surface 
conventions appropriate to each context of writing.  To support students' development as 
writers, institutions must provide opportunities for sustained, guided practice in a variety 
of writing tasks over time and enable students to develop an appropriate understanding of
the discourse of their chosen major so that they can effectively negotiate typical writing 
tasks within that major.  Only through such practice, research suggests, do students 
overcome the most common difficulties associated with academic writing, including 
surface errors, syntax problems, and similar difficulties.
Significantly, in order to provide this kind of effective support for students' development 
as writers, postsecondary institutions must also provide an appropriately trained and 
expert faculty that is adequately supported by ongoing professional development (see 
Appendix C).  Studies indicate the need for substantive and sustained professional 
development opportunities buttressed by ongoing local research and assessment.  Indeed, 
data collected by the Task Force on Undergraduate Writing Instruction underscore the 
lack of such support at UAlbany and the faculty's desire for more effective support for the
current writing-intensive program.  
UAlbany is virtually unique among four-year colleges and universities in its minimal 
programmatic attention to undergraduate writing instruction, and it is alone among its 
identified peer institutions and among the four SUNY university centers in the absence of
required writing courses in its undergraduate curriculum. Effective postsecondary writing
programs include a combination of required courses devoted explicitly to writing and 
writing-intensive courses in which students learn to write within specific academic 
disciplines.  The proposed UWP will offer such a combination of courses. The foundation
of the UWP is a required first-year seminar devoted specifically to guided practice in 
writing as a discipline itself and as an essential form of inquiry in postsecondary 
education (see Appendix B and G).  Given that writing is central to the intellectual 
inquiry that characterizes postsecondary education, such a seminar is a necessary 
foundation for students' ongoing development as effective writers and critical thinkers in 
both academic and non-academic contexts.  (In this regard, the proposed writing seminar 
must be distinguished from a traditional "composition" course in which writing is defined
essentially as a "basic skill" rather than a discipline itself; nevertheless, the UWS will 
address the fundamental skills of writing in the context of the practice of writing as a 
discipline and a form of inquiry.)  The UWP will also strengthen the University's current 
WI requirements by ensuring that students take the lower-division course early enough in 
their college careers to provide adequate support for their development as writers.  In this 
way the UWP will provide a sequence of courses that support students' development as 
writers and move students from a general experience with writing and academic inquiry 
to increasingly discipline-specific experiences that will enable them to deepen their 
writing knowledge and competence.
Major Proposed Changes to Establish the University Writing Program
1. Revise current writing-intensive policies as follows: 
a) All undergraduate students will be required to complete the lower-division
WI course by the time they have earned 60 credit hours.
b) All undergraduate students will be encouraged to take the upper-division 
WI course in their major.
c) Writing-intensive courses must include explicit attention to writing 
instruction appropriate to the discipline within which the courses are 
offered.
2. Establish a University Writing Seminar (UWS) to be required of all entering first-
year students and to be taken in the freshman year (see attached course proposal).
3. Establish a University Writing Committee (UWC) as a subcommittee of the 
Undergraduate Academic Council.
4. Implement a multi-faceted faculty development program to support faculty who 
teach WI courses and faculty who teach the UWS.
5. Develop and implement an ongoing assessment and evaluation program that is 
integral to the UWP.
Each of these changes will be explained separately below.
1. Revise Current Writing-Intensive Policies.  Current policies regarding writing-intensive
courses are included in the description of "Written Discourse" under "Communication 
and Reasoning Competencies" in the Undergraduate Bulletin: 
Students must satisfactorily complete with grades of C or higher or S a lower 
division Writing Intensive course, which is expected to be completed within the 
freshman or sophomore year, and a Writing Intensive course at or above the 300 
level, normally completed within the student’s major. These courses use writing 
as an important tool in the discipline studied and are not designed primarily to 
teach the technical aspects of writing. The emphasis is on using writing as a 
means of sharpening critical thinking in and understanding of the subject.
Under this proposal, this statement would be revised as follows (with changes indicated 
in boldface):
Students must satisfactorily complete with grades of C or higher or S a lower 
division Writing Intensive course, which is required to be completed by the 
time students have earned 60 credit hours, and a Writing Intensive course at or 
above the 300 level, strongly encouraged to be completed within the student’s 
major. These courses use writing as an important inquiry tool in the discipline 
studied and are intended to provide opportunities for students to extend their 
understanding of writing in various academic contexts and to support their 
continued development as writers and thinkers. The emphasis is on using 
writing as a means of sharpening critical thinking in and understanding of the 
subject and enhancing students' ability to use writing effectively in that 
discipline.
In addition, the four criteria for approved WI courses will be revised.  The current criteria
appear in the Undergraduate Bulletin as follows:
Approved courses must meet each of the following four criteria: 
A Substantial Body of Finished Work:  This is generally expected to be a total of 
20+ double-spaced pages in at least two, preferably more, submissions. It may be 
in a variety of forms-journal, reports, essays, research papers, etc.-not all of which
need to be graded. 
Opportunity for Students to Receive Assistance in Progress:  Such assistance may 
take several forms, from visits to the Writing Center (HU-140) to conferences 
with the instructor. 
Opportunity to Revise Some Pieces:  As revision is an essential characteristic of 
good writing, students should be able to revise some portion of their work. 
Response to Student Writing:  Such response may take several forms-from 
extended comments from the instructor to peer evaluation in student groups. It is 
expected, however, that the instructor will respond in detail to some extended 
work of the student. 
Under this proposal, these four criteria would be expanded to five and revised as follows 
(with changes indicated in boldface):
Approved courses must meet each of the following four criteria: 
A Substantial Body of Finished Work:  This is generally expected to be a total of 
20+ double-spaced pages in at least two, preferably more, submissions. It may be 
in a variety of forms-journal, reports, essays, research papers, etc.--not all of 
which need to be graded. 
Opportunity for Students to Receive Assistance in Progress:  Such assistance 
should include direct assistance from the course instructor, which may take 
several forms, including written feedback and individual conferences, and 
may also include other forms, such as visits to the Writing Center (HU-140). 
Opportunity for Students to Revise Some Pieces of Writing:  As revision is an 
essential characteristic of good writing, students should be given appropriate 
opportunities to revise some portion of their work. 
Response to Student Writing:  Such response may take several forms--from 
extended comments from the instructor to peer evaluation in student groups. It is 
expected, however, that the instructor will respond in detail to some extended 
work of the student. 
Direct Attention to Writing in the Discipline. Some portion of the course 
should be devoted explicitly to writing instruction as appropriate to the 
discipline within which the course is offered.  This instruction may take the 
form of in-class activities, assigned readings, or formal assignments that 
focus attention specifically on the practices of writing effectively within the 
discipline.
Departments and programs will decide how best to configure lower-division and upper-
division writing-intensive courses within the revised guidelines. The University Writing 
Director, working together with the Director of ITLAL, will assist departments in making
appropriate changes to existing WI courses or developing new courses that both meet the 
WI requirements and address departmental staffing and enrollment needs.
2. Establish a University Writing Seminar (UWS) to be required of all entering freshmen 
students and to be taken in the freshman year.  The University Writing Seminar 
emphasizes intensive practice and instruction in academic writing as well as writing in 
other rhetorical contexts (see Appendix G for course proposal form and sample syllabus). 
The UWS is based on established principles of rhetorical theory and will function as a 
sustained inquiry into the nature of written discourse and the practice of writing.  It is 
important to distinguish the UWS from traditional first-year composition courses that 
present writing as a basic skill and emphasize the technical aspects of writing.  By 
contrast, the UWS will focus on writing as both the subject of study and the practice of 
inquiry.  Students will be given sustained practice in various rhetorical tasks for the 
purpose of deepening their understanding of writing as a mode of inquiry and enhancing 
their ability to negotiate varied writing tasks in different academic and non-academic 
contexts.  The UWS provides the foundation for the two WI courses students are required
to take.
The following language will be added to the revised description of "Written Discourse" 
under "Communication and Reasoning Competencies" in the Undergraduate Bulletin (see
above):
Students must satisfactorily complete with grades of C or higher or S the 
University Writing Seminar, which is to be taken in the freshman year.  The 
University Writing Seminar provides sustained inquiry into the nature of written 
discourse and practice writing in various contexts.  It is intended to introduce 
students to intellectual inquiry in undergraduate education and to support students'
development as writers and thinkers who can negotiate various rhetorical tasks. 
In addition, the following language will be added to the Undergraduate Bulletin 
description of the University Writing Seminar:
Any appropriate lower-division undergraduate course, including Project 
Renaissance and Honors College courses, may qualify as the equivalent of the 
University Writing Seminar, provided that the course is approved as such by the 
University Writing Committee.  Such courses must be similar in intent to the 
University Writing Seminar and therefore must focus in a central way on writing 
and provide students with opportunities for regular and sustained practice in 
writing a variety of forms, for different purposes, to a variety of audiences, and in 
different media. 
The UWS will be a UNI course and part of the General Education Curriculum.  It will be 
administered through the Office of Undergraduate Studies and supervised by a program 
director who reports to the Vice Provost for Undergraduate Education. 
(Note: the legislation adopted by the University Senate in 1986--Bill No. 8586-10--
included a provision that "a representative of Academic Affairs will be responsible for 
administering the writing-intensive curriculum."  At one time, such a representative did 
administer the WI program as part of the General Education curriculum, but that 
responsibility eventually disappeared.  Under the proposed UWP, a director, ideally a 
full-time faculty member with appropriate expertise and experience, would be identified 
to administer the program under the auspices of the Vice Provost for Undergraduate 
Education, which would effectively reinstate oversight that existed as a result of Bill 
8586-10.  In other words, the director of the UWP would not be a new administrative 
position but the re-establishment of a position that once effectively existed.)
Note that during the period of transition from the current WI program to the new UWP 
(see Appendix F), the UWS will count as the lower-division WI course required under the
current General Education curriculum.
3. Establish a University Writing Committee (UWC) as a subcommittee of the 
Undergraduate Academic Council.  In order to provide systemic and ongoing oversight 
of the University Writing Program (UWP), the University Writing Committee will be 
established as a standing subcommittee of the Undergraduate Academic Council (UAC).  
The UWC would be charged with reviewing UWP policies and procedures, reviewing 
proposals for courses that would fulfill the UWS requirement, reviewing proposals for 
writing-intensive courses, monitoring the effectiveness of the UWP, and addressing 
relevant issues regarding the UWP.  Membership on the UWC should be representative of
the University community and reflect broad participation from among the various 
academic disciplines that make up the undergraduate curriculum.  The Director of the 
UWP would be an ex officio member of the UWC.
4. Implement a multi-faceted faculty development program to support faculty who teach 
WI courses and faculty who teach the UWS.  The proposed UWP would include a 
comprehensive program for faculty development (see Appendix C).  This program for 
faculty development will be integral to the UWP and essential for its effectiveness in 
enhancing undergraduate writing instruction at UAlbany.  The UWD, working in 
collaboration with the Director of ITLAL, will oversee the development and 
implementation of this program, which will provide a variety of kinds of support and 
training for faculty and graduate student teaching assistants, as described in Appendix C.  
In effect, the professional development component of the proposed UWP will provide 
coordinated, structural venues for discussions about writing, writing pedagogy, and 
assessment in a way that currently does not exist at UAlbany; it will address the need for 
consistency across WI courses and oversight that the current WI program lacks.
5. Develop and implement an assessment and evaluation program that is integral to the 
UWP.  The proposed UWP would be characterized by a carefully designed, ongoing 
assessment and evaluation program that will be integral to the UWP itself (see Appendix 
D).  Indeed, this assessment program, which will include various data sets and data 
analysis procedures and will be developed and conducted in collaboration with the Office
of Institutional Research, Planning, and Effectiveness (IRPE), will also be a crucial part 
of the process of the development and implementation of the UWP according to the 
timetable described in Appendix F.  In other words, it is expected that some of the 
specific components of the proposed UWP, especially the University Writing Seminar, 
will evolve during the implementation period in response to the analysis of data collected 
during this period; moreover, the UWP is expected to continue to evolve even after it is 
fully implemented as the assessment and evaluation process continues to provide data and
insight into the program's effectiveness.  Thus, this assessment and evaluation program is 
a formative process that will not only influence the design and implementation of the 
UWP but will also provide insight into the nature of student writing and writing 
instruction at UAlbany.  
APPENDIX A
RECOMMENDATIONS FOR IMPLEMENTATION OF THE UNIVERSITY WRITING PROGRAM
1. A University Writing Director (UWD) should be identified in Spring, 2008, and 
begin working with the Vice Provost for Undergraduate Education to develop the 
University Writing Seminar and begin working with departments to bring current 
writing-intensive courses into line with new policies by the dates indicated in the 
implementation schedule.
2. The University Writing Director should collaborate with the Director of the 
Institute for Teaching, Learning, and Academic Leadership to develop a program 
of professional development and support for faculty who teach writing-intensive 
courses.
3. The Vice Provost for Undergraduate Education, with assistance from the 
University Writing Director, should coordinate with deans and program directors 
to insure sufficient seats in writing-intensive courses to enable students to meet 
WI requirements.
4. Full-time lecturers should be hired through the UWP during early 2009 to provide
the core teaching staff for the University Writing Seminar.  (See below under "The
University Writing Seminar.")
5. The Vice Provost for Undergraduate Education, with assistance from the 
University Writing Director, should work with the Vice Provost for Enrollment 
Management, the Assistant Vice President for Enrollment Management, and the 
Director of Advisement Services Center to establish appropriate transfer course 
equivalencies for transfer students who wish to transfer courses to fulfill one or 
more of the three required courses in the University Writing Program.  It is 
recommended that equivalencies for writing courses identified as part of existing 
articulation agreements with other schools, particularly two-year SUNY colleges, 
be honored; therefore, students transferring from such schools will be able to use 
their first-year composition courses as the equivalent of the proposed UWS and 
other appropriate writing or writing-intensive courses (such as advanced 
composition) to count as the equivalent of the lower-division WI course at 
UAlbany.  In addition, current policies regarding high school AP English courses 
should be maintained; UAlbany currently allows students who earn specified 
minimum scores on the AP English exam to count their high school AP English 
course as a lower-division WI course.  Transfer equivalencies and policies 
regarding AP course credit should be reviewed by the University Writing 
Committee and the General Education Committee once the UWP is fully 
implemented.
6. The University Writing Director should coordinate with the Office of Institutional 
Research, Planning, and Effectiveness to develop a system of ongoing program 
evaluation for the University Writing Program. 
7. All departments and programs should work closely with the UWD to identify 
essential elements of effective writing within their respective disciplines and 
develop appropriate means of assessment and evaluation for writing-intensive 
courses.  This process should begin upon approval of the UWP and continue 
under the auspices of the University Writing Committee.
8. The University Writing Director and the Director of ITLAL should assist 
departments and programs in developing effective models of instruction for 
writing-intensive courses.
APPENDIX B
THE UNIVERSITY WRITING SEMINAR
The University Writing Seminar will become the foundation of the University Writing 
Program.  In view of available research and prevailing practice, sections of the UWS 
must be limited to 20 students in order to allow for the kind of effective instruction that 
will characterize the course.  (In a formal statement prepared by its College Section, the 
National Council of Teachers of English recommends that no more than 20 students be 
allowed in a writing class: "Students cannot learn to write without writing. In sections 
larger than 20, teachers cannot possibly give student writing the immediate and individual
response necessary for growth and improvement." See 
http://www.ncte.org/about/over/positions/category/class/107626.htm.  The Association of 
Departments of English also recommends that writing courses be capped at 20 students; 
see http://www.ade.org/policy/policy_guidelines.htm. Most college composition courses 
are limited to 25 students or fewer, and many university systems adopt system-wide 
enrollment policies for writing courses; the University of California system, for example, 
sets a limit of 20 students per section for writing courses.  At the University of Colorado 
at Boulder, a peer institution whose undergraduate writing program is very similar to the 
proposed UWP, introductory writing courses are capped at 20 students.  A survey of 
UAlbany faculty conducted by the Task Force on Undergraduate Writing indicated that a 
large majority of faculty advocate class sizes of 20 or fewer students in writing-intensive 
courses.)
Given that the UWS will be required of all entering first-year students and given that 
many students will eventually take other courses that will fulfill the requirement for the 
UWS,  approximately 100-120 sections of the course will have to be offered each 
academic year for the estimated 2400 entering first-year students.  
The majority of UWS sections will be taught by a core staff of full-time lecturers with 
appropriate expertise and experience.  These positions would be configured according to 
current University practice for full-time lecturers and would carry a teaching load of three
courses per semester.  Assuming 100 sections per academic year, 16 lecturers would teach
96 sections; the remaining sections would be taught by the UWD, selected graduate 
teaching assistants, and other interested full-time faculty (under buyout arrangements 
with their departments).
The lecturers hired to teach in the UWP would be full-time, non-tenure-track faculty.  
These lecturers would be fully participating faculty who would not only teach the UWS 
but also help develop the course and participate in ongoing research and evaluation 
initiatives (as described below).  This core staff of expert writing faculty would be part of
an innovative instructional model that has been implemented successfully at several 
postsecondary institutions, including the University of Colorado at Boulder (a peer 
institution) and the University of Denver (whose writing program is similar to the 
proposed UWP).  This model differs significantly from the conventional model in place 
at most universities, in which the majority of sections of first-year writing are taught by 
part-time adjunct faculty and graduate teaching assistants.  By contrast, the proposed 
UWP would be characterized by a stable core staff of appropriately trained experts in 
writing instruction.
APPENDIX C
PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT IN SUPPORT OF THE UNIVERSITY WRITING PROGRAM
A crucial component of the proposed University Writing Program (UWP) will be ongoing
professional development not only for faculty who teach WI courses but also for the full-
time lecturers hired to teach the University Writing Seminar (UWS).  As noted elsewhere 
in this proposal, this professional development program should be developed and 
implemented in conjunction with the Institute for Teaching, Learning, and Academic 
Leadership (ITLAL).  If the proposed UWP is to be effective in helping students develop 
as writers and thinkers, it is essential that faculty who teach WI courses or the UWS 
receive ongoing support to deepen their appreciation for the challenges facing student 
writers and to develop appropriate strategies for effective writing instruction.  Ultimately,
it is the responsibility of the faculty to identify and articulate expectations for effective 
writing at this institution and to provide proper support for students to enable them to 
meet those expectations.
The professional development program implemented as part of the UWP should include 
some or all of the following components:

Regular workshops and seminars for faculty who teach WI courses offered 
through the UWP and coordinated with ITLAL.

Regular staff meetings for lecturers teaching the UWS.

Orientation workshops for new faculty who teach WI courses and for new 
lecturers who teach the UWS.

A Faculty Writing Fellows Program to support for faculty who wish to 
enhance their WI courses, which would include a summer workshop and 
course released to develop and/or enhance WI courses.

Periodic meetings of WI faculty from various disciplines to review WI courses
and develop effective instructional strategies for such courses.
These components would be developed and adjusted as program needs are identified and 
as the ongoing evaluation program identified problems to be addressed in the UWP.
APPENDIX D
PROGRAM EVALUATION, RESEARCH, AND ASSESSMENT
The proposed UWP is based on available research on writing development and writing 
instruction as well as on data collected by the Task Force on Undergraduate Writing 
Instruction during the 2006-2007 academic year.  However, in order for the UWP to be 
effective, ongoing research on student writers and writing instruction at UAlbany must be
conducted, and that research must be integral to ongoing program evaluation.  This 
process would be overseen by the University Writing Director in coordination with the 
Office of Institution Research, Planning, and Effectiveness (IRPE); it should also be 
coordinated with the Council on Academic Assessment (CAA) of the University Senate.  
It is important to note that some components of this evaluation program, such as some 
analyses of student writing, would be managed independently by IRPE.
The assessment and evaluation program of the UWP will include the collection and 
analysis of various data sets, some of which already exist (such as those that are part of 
the campus-wide assessment process mandated by SUNY Central); it will include various
quantitative and qualitative measures such as the following:

UAlbany course evaluations

course evaluations designed specifically for the UWS and WI courses

analyses of student writing using the SUNY rubric 

analyses of student writing using rubrics and/or other instruments developed 
specifically for the UWP

exit interviews with students that focus on their experiences in the UWS and 
WI courses

analyses of enrollment data and students grades for the UWS and WI courses

evaluations of student portfolios according to instruments developed 
specifically for the UWP.
In order to develop and implement an effective program of ongoing research and 
evaluation, it is recommended that

The University Writing Director, working with IRPE and with the staff of the 
UWP, begin developing a plan in 2008 for data collection and program 
evaluation that would begin in 2009 and continue after the UWP is fully 
implemented in 2010.  This plan should include appropriate research design 
and, possibly, materials for IRB approval.

Results of data analyses of piloted sections of the UWS in 2009 be used to 
shape the UWS and make any necessary adjustments to the UWP.

Criteria and practices for assessment of student writing in the UWS and in WI 
courses be developed by the UWD in conjunction with the staff of the UWP; 
these criteria and practices should be consistent with established criteria and 
practices nationally with respect to postsecondary writing.

Regular (e.g. annual or biannual) analyses of UAlbany student writing be 
conducted by IRPE using instruments developed for this purpose.

A digital portfolio system, similar to those implemented at Clemson 
University and the University of Denver, be developed for the UAlbany UWP.
This system would facilitate program evaluation and provide data for ongoing 
research as part of the UWP.

The staff of the UWP participate fully in ongoing research and program 
evaluation.

Results of ongoing research and program evaluation be reported to the 
University Writing Committee on a regular basis (e.g. annually).
APPENDIX E
RESOURCE IMPLICATIONS OF THE UNIVERSITY WRITING PROGRAM
Costs for the University Writing Program fall mainly into two categories:
1. instructional costs for required writing-intensive courses
2. instructional costs for the University Writing Seminar.
Costs for Writing-Intensive Courses.  Under the University Writing Program, costs for the
lower- and upper-division WI courses will likely increase somewhat from their current 
levels as departments or programs adjust their WI course offerings in order to comply 
with the proposed new requirements for WI courses or add seats in WI courses.  These 
adjustments may require changes in resource allocations within those departments or 
programs.  For example, a department may need to offer additional sections of a lower-
division WI course as a result of the requirement that the lower-division WI course be 
completed by undergraduate students prior to their earning 60 credits.  The costs of such 
additional course offerings, however, may be offset by smaller enrollments in other 
courses. These costs may also be offset through the use of innovative instructional 
models (as some departments currently use), such as the use of small discussion sections 
taught by TAs with mentoring and support from ITLAL and the UWD to enable these 
sections to qualify as writing-intensive.
Given the variety of WI courses across departments and programs, it is impossible to 
anticipate any significant changes in costs associated with WI courses.  Some 
departments or programs will inevitably make greater changes in their WI course 
offerings than others.  But it is reasonable to assume that departments can make necessary
adjustments over time without the need for significant increases in resources.  It is 
expected that departments will work closely with the Undergraduate Dean, the UWD, and
ITLAL to make such adjustments in ways that adhere to the new WI policies yet are still 
essentially resource-neutral as much as possible.
Costs for the University Writing Seminar.  Initially, direct instructional costs for the UWS
would be approximately $575,000-600,000 per year.  The bulk of this expenditure would 
be devoted to salaries for the staff of fifteen full-time lecturers who would be hired to 
teach the UWS.  At an annual salary of $35,000 each (which is in line with current 
salaries of full-time lecturers at UAlbany and with salaries for similar positions at other 
institutions, such as the University of Colorado at Boulder), salaries for 15 lecturers 
would cost $560,000.  
The remaining costs for the UWS would be for course buyouts for faculty members and 
graduate TAs who would teach the UWS.  It is anticipated that the University Writing 
Director and any assistant directors assigned to the UWP would teach at least one section 
of the UWS per semester and thus would be bought out of at least one of their regular 
courses per semester in their home departments.  It is also anticipated that other full-time 
faculty members with an interest in the UWP, whose professional situations allow their 
participation in the UWP, would make similar arrangements in order to teach one or more
sections of the UWS.  And it is anticipated that interested and qualified doctoral TAs 
from various departments may be assigned to the UWP and, working under the 
mentorship of the UWD and ITLAL, would teach sections of the UWS. 
Ideally, arrangements that enable full-time, tenure-track faculty and doctoral TAs to teach
the UWS will increase over time so that the percentage of sections taught by the full-time
lecturers would decrease.  It is also expected that, as the UWP is implemented and 
developed over time, regular tenure-track faculty lines would be devoted to it, most likely
in the context of joint appointments (as is common with programs such as Women's 
Studies).  The goal is to create an expert, diverse, and stable staff to deliver instruction in 
the UWP.
Additional Costs of the University Writing Program.  The professional development 
component of the UWP, which is not a formal component of this proposal, will evolve 
over time as the UWD works closely with ITLAL and other available units to create 
substantive and sustainable mechanisms to support faculty who teach WI courses and 
who participate in the UWP.  (These mechanisms are described in the report of the 
Provost's Task Force on Undergraduate Writing.)  Costs for many of the likely 
components of the professional development program of the UWP, such as coordinated 
workshops, are expected to be minimal.  More extensive initiatives, such as a Faculty 
Writing Fellows program that might include course buyouts for participating faculty, may
require larger financial commitments from the University administration and can perhaps 
be funded through several existing funding streams for faculty development.
As is noted in the report of the Provost's Task Force on Undergraduate Writing, the 
current university administration has expressed strong support for this initiative and has 
identified several potential funding sources for the proposed UWP.  It is expected that 
adequate funding for the UWP will be provided in the university budget.  It is also 
important to note that the University must identify new sources of funding for the UWP 
rather than rely exclusively on diverting monies from existing funding streams.
APPENDIX F
RECOMMENDED TIMETABLE FOR IMPLEMENTATION
The main components of the University Writing Program and the major policy changes 
associated with it would be implemented according to the following timetable:

University Writing Director appointed:  Summer, 2008

University Writing Committee established:  Fall, 2008.

Professional Development Program developed:  2008-2009.

Pilot sections of University Writing Seminar offered (these sections will fulfill the
lower-division WI course requirement):  Spring, 2009.

Initial cohort of full-time lecturers (approximately 8 positions) hired to begin 
teaching the UWS in fall, 2009:  Spring, 2009.

Adustments made to UWS as a result of analysis of pilot sections from spring, 
2009:  Summer, 2009.

University Writing Seminar offered to entering freshmen (these sections will 
fulfill the lower-division WI course requirement):  Fall, 2009.

Evaluation and assessment program implemented:  Fall, 2009.

Additional full-time lecturers hired to begin teaching the UWS in fall, 2010:  
Spring, 2010.

Adjustments made to UWS on the basis of analyses of data collected as part of the
evaluation and assessment program during 2009-2010:  Summer, 2010.

University Writing Seminar required of all entering freshmen:  Fall, 2010.

Lower-Division WI course required before 60 credits taken applies to students 
entering in Fall 2010.
APPENDIX G
COURSE PROPOSAL FOR THE UNIVERSITY WRITING SEMINAR
UNI 000: University Writing Seminar
Course Description
As the first of at least three courses students will take in the University Writing Program 
(one lower- and one upper-division WI course are also required), the University Writing 
Seminar introduces students to the culture of writing in the academy, and prepares them 
to take an active role in their own literacy educations.
To those ends, they will (a) learn to approach writing as an individual process, a form of 
inquiry, and a social practice; (b) practice applying rhetorical principles to assess and 
negotiate discipline-based writing tasks; (c) be given sustained, guided experience 
writing for a variety of purposes, to different audiences, and in different media (including
traditional, digital and multi-media formats); and (d) develop an appropriate lexicon for 
discussing and analyzing writing and writing situations.
Rationale
While all students come to UAlbany with backgrounds in writing, they need–and 
deserve–an introduction to the local culture. The Seminar is thus an invitation for them to
explore, in a very hands-on way, their new academic community’s conceptions of 
writing; and, equally important, to prepare to collaborate with their subsequent instructors
in continuing that exploration, not only in writing and writing-intensive courses, but in all
their studies.
Topically, then, the Seminar is a course that deals with writing and language. Readings, 
short writings and related assignments enable students to examine writing as a disciplined
and disciplinary activity. At its center, however, are four writing projects that exemplify 
uses of writing students will engage again and again in their academic careers (and 
beyond):
***writing to explore or inquire into a problem, experience, idea, concept, or issue
***writing to analyze a text, idea, event, or phenomenon
***writing with support from sources to report on or explore an issue or concept
***writing to establish and defend a position
In the process of completing each of these assignments, students will have opportunities 
for individual conferences with the course instructor; participate in peer response groups 
to examine one another’s work-in-progress; and revise their projects in response to 
instructor and peer feedback. The semester’s accumulated body of work will be 
assembled in a portfolio that students will review with the Seminar instructor, and 
continue to build in subsequent courses.
Course Goals
Students who complete the Seminar successfully will have met the following seven goals:
1. Compiled a portfolio of their own writings, revisions and instructors’ 
commentaries thereon.
2. Gained an understanding of writing as a process, practiced managing their own 
versions of that process, and developed a critical, self-reflective approach to 
writing that will aid their subsequent development.
3. Developed an understanding of and a lexicon for handling discipline-based 
inquiry in higher education, the central role of writing in such inquiry, and the 
kinds of writing sponsored by various academic disciplines.
4. Learned to ask appropriate questions of rhetorical situations in both academic and 
non-academic contexts so as to negotiate those situations effectively as writers 
and readers.
5. Refined their ability to locate, assess and use appropriate texts and other sources 
in order to complete writing tasks.
6. Improved both their understanding of and ability to follow the conventions of 
academic discourse (including those concerning form, attribution, style, and 
usage).
7. Gained experience using a variety of media for written communication.
SAMPLE SYLLABUS
UNI 000: The University Writing Seminar
Instructor:
Class:
Office: 
Email: 
Office Hours: 
 
Required books:
Gerald Graff and Cathy Birkenstein, They Say/I Say: The Moves that Matter in Academic
Writing (W.W. Norton, 2005)
James Lester, The Essential Guide to Research Writing Across the Disciplines (MLA, 
2004)
Course packet (available at Shipmates or the Library’s E-Reserves)
Course Goals
The University Writing Seminar satisfies the first of the University’s three Writing 
Intensive requirements. It has the following seven goals:
     (1) To allow you to compile a portfolio of your work: drafts, revisions, and the 
commentaries on them (by me, as your instructor, and by your classmates). We will use 
this collection to assess your learning over the term and to identify those strengths and 
weaknesses that will most affect your next steps as a writer.
     (2) To help you gain an understanding of writing as a process and to give you guided 
practice managing your individual versions of that process. People approach writing in a 
wide variety of ways–there is no “perfect” method–but there is a good deal we can learn 
both from one another and from research on writing about successful practices. And of 
course there is no substitute for learning by doing, so you can expect to do, reflect on, and
talk about writing on a regular basis.
     (3) To introduce you to the nature of discipline-based inquiry in higher education, the 
central role of writing in such inquiry, and the kinds of  writing sponsored by various 
academic disciplines. At the heart of the academy is the process we might call 
knowledge-making, and at the heart of that process–the heart of the heart of higher 
education–is writing. We will look carefully at how scholars in different fields go about 
this work.
     (4) To teach you to ask appropriate questions of rhetorical situations in both academic 
and non-academic contexts so that you can negotiate those situations effectively as 
writers. We always write in a specific context: to some reader(s) for some purpose as a 
particular version of ourselves following some particular set of rules or conventions. It is 
certainly possible to write without considering such things–to depend on luck, or to 
proceed on sheer instinct–but you increase your chances of succeeding as a writer by 
getting a handle on these variables in advance, and proceeding accordingly.
     (5) To refine your ability to locate, assess and use appropriate texts and other sources 
in order to complete writing tasks. Academic writing, in particular, is a kind of extended 
conversation, a collective effort to understand the world. In order to participate, then, we 
have to begin by learning how to listen, as it were: to draw upon the work and words of 
others. To that end, we will explore the world of academic publication, including its 
rapidly growing digital dimension; discuss how to evaluate sources; and examine the 
rules that govern how we represent what those sources have to offer in our own writing.
     (6) To improve your understanding of the conventions of public writing in general, 
and academic discourse in particular, and to strengthen your ability to follow those 
conventions in your own writing. (These conventions include such things as formatting, 
usage, documentation, spelling, and so on.) If you want your writing to achieve its 
purpose–to earn you an A, to win you a grant, to land you a job–you need to know, and 
probably to follow, the conventions your audience will be expecting you to recognize. In 
other words, you will usually want to write a research paper that looks like a research 
paper, a grant proposal that looks like a grant proposal, an application letter that looks 
like an application letter. You will want to punctuate your writing in ways that your 
readers think a writer ought to punctuate, spell the way they think a writer ought to spell, 
and so on. Even if you decide to violate those conventions–and you might have reason to 
do so–you can’t do that (or do it as well) unless you know what they are.
     (7) To give you appropriate experiences with using various media (e.g., digital 
technologies, online forums) for written communication and multimedia presentation. 
Powerful and rapidly developing technologies are changing the way we communicate, 
and even reshaping what it means to write. You will increasingly be asked to use these 
technologies in your academic work, as well as in your life outside of school. 
Accordingly, we will examine these technologies and their attendant new media, not only
to learn how to use them effectively, but also to consider the ways in which they “use” us,
as it were: the ways in which they are (re)shaping the nature of writing itself.
Course Sequence
     To these ends, we will undertake four related writing projects. Each one features a use 
for writing you will turn to again and again during your academic career and beyond:
***writing to explore or inquire into a problem, experience, idea, concept, or issue
***writing to analyze a text, idea, event, or phenomenon
***writing with support from sources to report on an issue or concept
***writing to establish and defend a position
     For the sake of coherence and efficiency, all four of these projects will revolve around 
the same general topic and will follow the same general pattern. We will begin by 
analyzing examples of writing which, though drawn from different disciplines, model the 
kind of work you will be doing. Some of these will be by professional scholars, but we 
will also consider student writings, and our object will be to help you develop a sense of 
the kind of writing you are aiming to produce. Next, we will do one or more exercises to 
get you started in the right direction–have you experiment, for example, with the initial 
steps of whichever use of writing it is from the perspective of the humanities, say, then 
the social sciences, and then the hard sciences. Then you will head off to produce a first 
draft of the target writing, bring it to class to get feedback (from both classmates and 
instructor) on the basis of which you will revise it for a second submission and a grade. 
For at least one of these four main assignments, you will be encouraged to venture 
beyond a traditional print-based product and incorporate new technologies to produce a 
multimedia document or a document in a medium suited to your purpose (such as a 
website).
Course Policies
     1. Timeliness, preparedness and attendance: Class meetings will begin promptly at
###. If you arrive after that (and coming in late is, of course, both counterproductive and 
rude), you will be marked absent. Similarly, you need to come to class having done the 
requisite reading and writing. If you have not–if you come to class unprepared–you will 
be marked absent. You are allotted three (3) absences for the term. Any additional 
absences constitute grounds for failure.
     2. Due dates: All writing assignments are due at the beginning of class on the day 
designated unless otherwise noted. EXCEPTION: You may have ONE extension on a 
writing project, but (a) you must request that extension in writing or by email BEFORE 
the project is due; and (b) in that request, you must specifically propose the new deadline,
get approval for it, and then meet it. Late papers will NOT be accepted.
Evaluation
 Your grade in the course will be based on the following:
     In-class exercises, short writing assignments, quizzes             10%
     Writing Projects: To get full credit on any of the four writing projects, you must 
submit all portions, and submit them on time. Thus, while the final grade will be heavily 
influenced by the quality of the final draft, I will also take into account strong early drafts
and the constructive use of feedback.
     Exploring a problem, experience, idea, concept, or issue   10%
     Analyzing a text, idea, event, or phenomenon                     15%
     Drawing upon sources to report on an issue or concept     20%
     Establishing and defending a position                                  25%
University Policy on Plagiarism
The Undergraduate Bulletin spells out the following definition of and policy on 
plagiarism:
“Presenting as one's own work the work of another person (for example, the words, ideas,
information, data, evidence, organizing principles, or style of presentation of someone 
else). Plagiarism includes paraphrasing or summarizing without acknowledgment, 
submission of another student's work as one's own, the purchase of prepared research or 
completed papers or projects, and the unacknowledged use of research sources gathered 
by someone else. Failure to indicate accurately the extent and precise nature of one's 
reliance on other sources is also a form of plagiarism. The student is responsible for 
understanding the legitimate use of sources, the appropriate ways of acknowledging 
academic, scholarly, or creative indebtedness, and the consequences for violating 
University regulations.
Examples of plagiarism include: failure to acknowledge the source(s) of even a few 
phrases, sentences, or paragraphs; failure to acknowledge a quotation or paraphrase of 
paragraph-length sections of a paper; failure to acknowledge the source(s) of a major idea
or the source(s) for an ordering principle central to the paper's or project's structure; 
failure to acknowledge the source (quoted, paraphrased, or summarized) of major 
sections or passages in the paper or project; the unacknowledged use of several major 
ideas or extensive reliance on another person's data, evidence, or critical method; 
submitting as one's own work, work borrowed, stolen, or purchased from someone else.”
Illustrative Course Schedule
Week 1: Writing to explore an experience (I)
Day 1: Introduction to the course. In-class writing about the syllabus; discussion.
   Reading assignment: models of reflective writing from a humanities perspective
   Writing assignment: “My Background in Writing.”
Day 2: Share essays on background, discuss, submit.
            Analyze and discuss models for reflective writing.
   Writing assignment: reflective writing from humanities perspective
Week 2: Writing to explore an experience (II)
Day 3: Share essay drafts in small groups, identifying similarities and differences. 
Plenary discussion. Submit essays.
             
   Reading assignments: 
(a) Models of reflective writing from social sciences perspective
(b) “Preface” to They Say/I Say: The Moves that Matter in Academic Writing, 
“Demystifying Academic Conversation”
   Writing assignment: revise “My Background in Writing”
Day 4: Analyze models of reflective writing from social sciences perspective.
            Discuss preface to They Say/I Say: The Moves that Matter in Academic Writing.
   Writing assignment: reflective writing from social sciences perspective
Week 3: Writing to explore an experience (III) 
Day 5: Share essays in small groups, identifying similarities and differences. Plenary 
discussion. Submit essays.
   Reading assignments:
(a) Models of reflective writing from hard sciences perspective
(b) “Introduction” to They Say/I Say: The Moves that Matter in Academic Writing, 
“Entering the Conversation”
Day 6: Analyze models of reflective writing from a hard sciences perspective.
            Discuss “Introduction” to They Say/I Say: The Moves that Matter in Academic 
Writing
Writing assignment: reflective essay from hard sciences perspective
Week 4: Writing to explore an experience (IV)/Writing to analyze (I)
Day 7: Share essays in small groups, identifying similarities and differences. Plenary 
discussion. Submit essays.
Reading assignment: models of analytical essays from humanities perspective
Day 8: Examine models of analytical essays from humanities perspective
   Writing assignment: draft of an essay analyzing phenomenon from humanities 
perspective. Bring four extra copies of draft to class.
   Reading assignment: Guidelines for peer response
Week 5: Writing to analyze (II)
Day 9: Review the guidelines for peer response, then move into groups to give both oral 
and written responses to drafts of analyses.
   Writing assignment:  revise humanities-based analysis in response to peer feedback, 
and prepare for submission.  Be sure to append all peer responses.
   Reading assignment: models for analytical essay from social sciences perspective
Day 10: Submit the revised humanities-based analysis with all peer responses appended.
              Discuss models for  analytical essay from social sciences perspective.
   Writing assignment: draft of an essay analyzing phenomenon from social sciences 
perspective. Bring four extra copies of draft to class.
Week 6: Writing to analyze (III)
Day 11: Review again the guidelines for peer response, and talk about amendments or 
additions.  Move into groups to give both oral and written responses to drafts of social 
science-based analyses.
   Writing assignment: revise social sciences-based analysis in response to peer feedback, 
and prepare for submission. Be sure to append all peer responses.
   
Reading assignment: models for analytical essay from hard sciences perspective
Day 12: Submit the revised social sciences-based analysis with all peer responses 
appended.  Discuss models for analytical essay from hard-sciences perspective.
   Writing assignment: draft of an essay analyzing phenomenon from hard-sciences 
perspective. Bring four extra copies of draft to class.
Week 7: Writing to analyze (IV)/Drawing Upon Resources to Write a Report (I)
Day 13: Using the guidelines for peer response, provide both oral and written responses 
to drafts of essays analyzing phenomenon from a hard-science perspective.
   Writing assignment: revise hard sciences-based analysis in response to peer feedback, 
and prepare for submission. Be sure to append all peer responses.
   Reading assignments:
(a) model of research-based report from humanities perspective;
(b) The Essential Guide to Research Writing Across the Disciplines on annotated 
bibliographies
Day 14: Submit the revised hard sciences-based analysis with all peer responses 
appended.
              Analyze models of research-based report from humanities perspective.
   Reading assignments:
(a) model of research-based report from social sciences perspective;
(b) They Say/I Say: The Moves that Matter in Academic Writing on quotation
Week 8: Drawing Upon Sources to Write a Report (II) 
Day 15: Analyze models of research-based report from social sciences perspective
   Reading assignments: 
(a) model of research-based report from hard sciences perspective;
(b) The Essential Guide to Research Writing Across the Disciplines on documentation
Day 16: Analyze models of research-based report from hard sciences perspective.
   Writing assignment: Choose a research perspective and topic, and draft a one-page 
prospectus with 4-6 sources listed in an annotated bibliography.
Week 9: Drawing Upon Sources to Write a Report (III)
Day 17: Share prospectuses and annotated bibliographies in response groups. Plenary 
discussion will identify strengths and weaknesses. Submit to instructor at end of period.
Day 18: Instructor returns prospectuses and annotated bibliographies with comments. 
Discussion of proposed projects.
   Writing
 
  assignment
 
 : draft of research report. Bring four extra copies of draft to class. 
Week 10: Drawing Upon Sources to Write a Report (IV)
Day 19: Using the guidelines for peer response, provide both oral and written responses 
to drafts of research reports.
   Writing assignment: revise research reports in response to peer feedback, and prepare 
for submission. Be sure to append all peer responses. Due Day 21.
   Reading assignment: model(s) of humanities-based writing to establish and defend a 
position 
Day 20: Discuss model of humanities-based writing to establish and defend a position
   Reading assignment: model(s) social sciences-based writing to establish and defend a 
position 
Week 11: Writing to Establish and Defend a Position (I)
Day 21: Discuss model(s) of social sciences-based writing to establish and defend a 
position 
              Submit draft of research reports to instructor.
   Reading assignment: model(s) hard sciences-based writing to establish and defend a 
position
Day 22: Discuss model(s) of hard sciences-based writing to establish and defend a 
position
   Writing assignment: Draft of prospectus and annotated bibliography for position paper. 
Bring four extra copies of draft to class. 
Week 12: Writing to Establish and Defend a Position (II)
Day 23: Using the guidelines for peer response, provide both oral and written responses 
to half of the group members’ drafts of research reports.
Day 24: Using the guidelines for peer response, provide both oral and written responses 
to other half of group members’ drafts of research reports.
  Writing assignment: revise position papers in response to peer feedback, and prepare for
submission. Be sure to append all peer responses. Due Day 25.
   Reading assignment: assemble all work written this term and prepare to bring it to class
Week 13: Assembling the Course Portfolio I
Day 25: Read and discuss guidelines for portfolio assembly. Begin work on portfolio in 
class.
   Writing assignment: draft of reflective essay on portfolio materials. 
Day 26: Share drafts of reflective essays and discuss.
   Writing assignment: final draft of reflective essay. Prepare portfolio for final 
submission.
Week 14:Assembling the Course Portfolio II
Day 27: Submit final portfolios.
              Course evaluation forms.
Day 28: Final individual conferences on portfolios begin, and extend through the final 
examination period.

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